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The Second Sound

Letter 24 of the Book of Forgetting

The old well stood grey at the south edge, and the morning air was damp. Liesl Kfir stood at the mouth with a stone in her hand, and Dalia Shalev held her phone out toward the water, recorder running.

"You ready?" Liesl said. "I'll drop it from arm height, same as before. You just say when you hear the splash."

"And you say it too, at the same time," Dalia said. "I've got the recorder going. Don't look at my face."

"Fine. Dropping now."

The stone fell. The splash came.

"Hear it," Dalia said.

"Hear it," Liesl said.

Dalia checked her phone. "Let me replay that. On the recording, your voice comes about a second after mine. Same drop."

"So you heard it first," Liesl said. "That's what I thought. But I'm not hearing it late—I'm hearing it twice."

Dalia looked at her. "Twice? You mean two splashes?"

"One splash, then a second sound a second later. Like a soft echo. You don't hear that second one?"

"No. Just the one. Let's do two more drops, same height, and I'll mark where each of us speaks on the recording."

"Do it," Liesl said. "If I'm hearing an echo the rest of you don't, that changes everything."

The second drop came. "Hear it," Dalia said. "Hear it," Liesl said. The third, the same.

Dalia lowered her phone. "Same gap. You're a full second behind me both times. But you're not hesitating—you speak right after the sound you hear."

"That's what I'm telling you," Liesl said. "I'm hearing a second sound. The question is why."


Ivo Segal found them at the well mouth an hour later, his grey-green jacket buttoned against the damp. His radio was clipped to his shoulder.

"Liesl," he said. "Your fog-side test—did it tell us anything new about that splash? My boy's still saying 'the fog is just fog' in his sleep, and I want to know if it's tied to that."

"It's still a full second late, even from inside the fog line," Liesl said. "Same at all three heights. So it's not the well's depth—that's the only thing we ruled out."

"So the fog doesn't change it," Ivo said. "That's something, at least. But Ophir's words—you think the fog carries a voice, don't you?"

"I think some of us hear things others don't," Liesl said. "Dalia and I did the listening test—she doesn't hear the second splash. I do. Every drop."

"You hear a second splash? Like an echo?"

"About a second after the first. Not in the recording, not on Noa's phone. Only in my head, or my ears. And I timed it from twenty paces away—still 3.1."

"So it's not the well, not the fog, not your reaction," Ivo said. "It's you. And my boy's words—maybe he's hearing something from the fog the same way you hear that echo."

"That's what I'm afraid of," Liesl said. "If I can hear a splash that isn't there, maybe he's hearing a sentence that isn't there either. Or maybe it is there, and only some of us can pick it up."

"Can we test it?" Ivo said. "Take the same stone, same height, one of us inside the fog line, one at the well mouth. Same stopwatch. See if the delay follows the person or the place."

"We'd need two timers running at once," Liesl said. "Mine's the one that always reads late. Yours would be the ordinary one. If we swap, we'd know."

"I can get a second mechanical stopwatch from the hall," Ivo said. "Tomorrow morning, before my rounds. We'll do three drops each, both positions."

"Good," Liesl said. "And if the delay follows me even into the fog, then it's not the fog. It's something in my head. And I'll have to live with that."

"Or we'll both be wrong and it'll be something else entirely," Ivo said. "That's the thing about tests—they don't care what we want."


At the town hall that afternoon, Noa Hadar found Dalia at the long table with the voice memo pulled up on her phone.

"Dalia, can we do the listening test now?" Noa said. "I'll record, you and Liesl each say when you hear the splash, no timers in sight, and we'll write down what we each heard before checking anything."

"Yes, I've been waiting for this," Dalia said. "Let's use the memo from your test with Liesl—mark the release and the splash on paper, no numbers."

They played it three times. On paper, both of them placed the splash at about three seconds after release. Liesl's spoken cue on the same recording sat a full second later, every drop.

"The recording is ordinary," Noa said. "The delay only shows up when Liesl times it herself. It's her hearing, not the instrument."

"Or her perception," Dalia said. "I want to test her without telling her what to listen for."

"The well test will do that," Noa said. "I'll drop the stone, she'll just say when she hears it, and I'll record at the same moment."

Dalia nodded. She wrote the test in her notebook. Outside, the grey pressed at the window, and somewhere a child would wake and speak again, and I still did not know what it meant.

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